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Seems that in the Summer we ride into the clouds
and suffocate suffering under the sun
boiling and baking like the dirt
from whence we came, and no one's the same
and we're all just sore and hurt.

I long to see what part of Iris
I can't ever escape this hollow
where I am dying.
But once within this haunted palace.
I will find the key.
to find my Harmony.

Yes, indeed we have come at last
to the castle in the sea
where the dragons soar, and the cries
"come unto me."
ring from the mountain in the sky.
where no one goes, but everyone knows
that demons live inside!

I long to see what part of Iris
I can't ever escape this hollow
where I am dying.
But once within this haunted palace.
I will find the key.
to find my Harmony.

so take away all the islands and the seas
and you're left with dirt
and instead of you and me.
They leave in place robotic counterparts
that stay inside, and no one's alive
and no one knows where to start!

God save us from this hell (I know very well) what lies in wait for us now
and what their stories tell!

I long to see what part of Iris
I can't ever escape this hollow
where I am dying.
But once within this haunted palace.
I will find the key.
to find my Harmony.
©2005-2009 ~Shadoling
:iconshadoling:

Author's Comments

whether of the eye, or the flower, it is uncertain. :blowkiss: enjoy.
(special thanks to and for their input, this is especially for them.)

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:iconmarianne101:
Awww hun:hug: Thank you :heart: It's beautiful:)

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:blackrose: :butterflytwo:
My Angel~Chris =WhatShortyDid :date:
I always find someone to bruise & leave behind
:iconezykah:
this is absoloutley beautiful. I loved reading it, that ive read it 5 times so far! And now to add to my favs to read again and again! Beautiful :hug: :heart: thank you :)

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~*~I B r u i s e E a s i l y~*~
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My Stock: ~trinitypassion-stock
:iconsatyr9:
"robotic counterparts" is my favourite bit. I like how you leave a positive message in there.
:iconshadoling:
thank you. It's positive, you say? Eh, I suppose so. I do try to leave messages...sometimes it doesn't work out, but I do try.

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"We are the future, Charles, not them. They no longer matter." -Eric Lensherr (X-1.)
"You think you know what you are, what's to come...You have barely begun." (Buffy vs. Dracula.)
:iconshadoling:
holy crap! you did that...for my poetry? Thank you so very much ezy, I'm glad you enjoyed Iris that much and that it meant something to you. :blush:

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"We are the future, Charles, not them. They no longer matter." -Eric Lensherr (X-1.)
"You think you know what you are, what's to come...You have barely begun." (Buffy vs. Dracula.)
:iconshadoling:
:O you faved it! oh, happy day! :D you and jimmy are like the toughest safes to crack, ;) you see, I try to make everybody happy and you two in particular are like the mum and dad that inspire my poetry.
(considering what critique I get from my REAL parents...*grumble*)

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"We are the future, Charles, not them. They no longer matter." -Eric Lensherr (X-1.)
"You think you know what you are, what's to come...You have barely begun." (Buffy vs. Dracula.)
:iconmarianne101:
Funny:P You aren't the first person to tell me that I'm a tough safe to crack!
You're writing always makes me happy:)
And parents tend to be overcritical:( Pay them little mind:hug:

Ok, now, if I'm the Mum & Jimmy's the Dad.....erm......
What's his username?:P And does he owe any child support?!?

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:blackrose: :butterflytwo:
My Angel~Chris =WhatShortyDid :date:
I always find someone to bruise & leave behind
:iconshadoling:
:giggle: :rofl: Jimmy = my sensei and father of poetry. :D he owes you tons of money and he plays in a rock band. :headbang:
I'm not surprised, though, honestly, you're so sweet, but very mysterious. :giggle: ah well. thank you so much, I like making people happy! :blush:

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"We are the future, Charles, not them. They no longer matter." -Eric Lensherr (X-1.)
"You think you know what you are, what's to come...You have barely begun." (Buffy vs. Dracula.)
:iconmarianne101:
Oooh:D he's in a rock band, eh? I hope he's cute:P

So I'm mysterious? Cool:D That's better than some things I've been called. hehe:P

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:blackrose: :butterflytwo:
My Angel~Chris =WhatShortyDid :date:
I always find someone to bruise & leave behind

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