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Bat or Moth? by ~Shadoling:iconShadoling:



So out there on the windowsill, fluttering in the moonlight,
bathing in starlight like ebony gossamer
something shimmers, shifts and disappears
faster than the eye can follow
I wish I could follow
and follow it oh-so-far.

Where are you going in such a hurry?
With your wings set down
to cup the gentle wind
on the midsummer night
when everything is peaceful
and the neighborhood is restless
but quietly rumbling
like the tiger on the mattress,
who's watching those able wings,
that swiftly sift the air in time
to look for better things to find.

Hungry now, I take it.
I can't hold you.
Not with my mind or hands,
so I release you from my sight
in the hopes of a good tomorrow
for you, remaining free.
Bat or moth?
I shan't ask anymore.
©2006-2009 ~Shadoling
:iconshadoling:

Author's Comments

There's something outside flapping its wings.
I had to ask my cat, "Bat or Moth?"
she doesn't know.
she's still looking.

-N.

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:iconpinocchio-liez:
HaHa! This is quite a cute poem {especially if one reads the description before delving into your piece}! I love the description...places the reader right in your bedroom...next to your cat...HaHa! Very nicely written Mate :aww:!

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May God help me if I ever have to use my art...:blackrose:
:iconvampirevengeance:
really good. I like bats :D

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The only way you'll really know is to really let it go. Maybe in the future, you're gonna come back to me.
-Ingrid Michaelson
:music:
:iconawitchkitty:
This is wonderful, dear! I absolutely adore it, and I think I'll fave it... Great write!

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"Hey! One of you is going to fall and die, and I'm not cleaning it up!" ~ Captain Malcom Reynolds (Firefly)
:iconnothinisworthit:
With your wings set down
to cup the gentle wind

Love this line "cup the gentle wind" wow!!! how do you think of these things???

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I'm a maniac, MANIAC!! :boogie: :dance: :D
:iconshadoling:
:Giggle: I think of these things because...;) (whisper) I think TOO MUCH.

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"We are the future, Charles, not them. They no longer matter." -Eric Lensherr (X-1.)
"You think you know what you are, what's to come...You have barely begun." (Buffy vs. Dracula.)
:iconnothinisworthit:
:O ... i never thought of it that way...

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I'm a maniac, MANIAC!! :boogie: :dance: :D

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